Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Sunday, April 11, 2021
How can i be the best Version of myself
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hey Bree, fantastic work on your inquiry slide! You have put in a lot of work and focus for this and I am super impressed with how you have put the definitions for each topic into your own words. Next time ask the readers a question in your blurb so that they have something to respond to. Keep it up!
ReplyDeleteHi Bree my name's Chloe, Great work on your slide it looks amazing! It looks like you've spent alot of time on it. Maybe next time write some more in your introduction. I think your right about speaking nicely to everyone.
ReplyDeleteNice work, Bye!